Using physical punishment is considered to be increasingly common among people, some parents believe that punishing children by spankig is the best way to discipline their kids. In my opinion, I completely think that using physical punishment is entirely unnessecery way to raise children.
Firstly, some parents might think that punishments such as smacking and spanking are the most effective way to raise their children because it will scare their kids of being hurt whenever they do something wrong. Therefore, kids will not do the wrong thing again due to their fear of being hurt. Secondly, sometime, it is considered to be a better way to discipline bad children than talking to them because they are too disobedient for some reason. There have been reacorded that a gorwing number of parents in many Asian countires who tend to use physical phunishment to educate their children in the last decade. Finnaly, using corporal punishment is believed to be an effective method in order to educate unbehaved children.
However, corporal punishment such as smacking and spanking could leave a destrimental effect on children, it could raise these children growing up as violated adults. In other word, children might become violated and aggressive as a result of suffering from physical punishment. For example, many good children end up being unbehaved as a result of living with aggressive parents. Besides, physical punishment in school is considered to be the worst way to educate students because this method might scare students and they might drop school. In my opinion, neither teachers nor parens are allowed to use corporal punishment on children because it is variety of ways to raise a child instead of using violation.
In conclusion, physical punishment could be the most effective way to educate a child from being bad behaved. However, I believe that there are more effective methods to raise a child than using violation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20063694268 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75660997158 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474522292994 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.308764085 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.642857143 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0991279713915 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429616249644 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304736793158 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0631007884752 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373354615613 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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