Smoking in public places should be banned, Do you agree or disagree with this statement.
No one has any doubt about consequences of smoking and mostly people contemplate that it should be prohibited to smoke publically. I am in favor to support this campaign. I shall explain why I think like this.
First of all, smoking cause cancer and so many people died every year worldwide. Recently it has been found out that suffers are not only active smokers but also the people who inhale the smokes caused by other smokers. For instance, my uncle never used tobacco in any form and lately diagnosed the cancer and doctors believe that passive smoking could be the reason. Furthermore, ban on smoking in public will deter people especially young people to avoid smoking. It is said that liberty encourages the people to follow the wrong path and it stand valid in case of smoking. Availability of cigarettes and company sometime deviate the mind of non- smokers and they become the active smokers gradually. Such imposition will definitely dissuade people to give a try to smoking.
Finally, the puff emanate from smoking pollute the quality of air and this has been the contributing factor in degraded air quality. WHO organization recently raised the issue related to quality of air in urban areas and mentioned that not only the fossil fuels but smoking also produce pollutants which deteriorate the overall environment, resulting people to become asthmatic or suffer from other diseases. A case in a point is Delhi’s smog which caused people to wear the mask from polluted air and puffs.
To sum-up, Smoking is global problem and millions lose their life battle to disease caused by smoking. It is in favor of every one to prohibit smoking in public places in order to improve air quality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 545, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'stands'?
Suggestion: stands
... people to follow the wrong path and it stand valid in case of smoking. Availability ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, for instance, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95833333333 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55607444913 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579861111111 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7647550807 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148808582376 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533956542052 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475818496743 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10697605142 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518554754971 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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