Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Recently, some individuals have preferred to use supplementary forms of medicine against illnesses. However, the specialists believe such approaches are not effective at the best, even worse, they may have some devastating side effects. They express some rational reasons that will be discussed in the following.
On one hand, medical specialists reject alternative medicinal modalities as no scientific document is available to approve them. In other words, it is not scientifically documented that such medicine can efficiently inhibit the development of a specific disease. In fact, before applying a specific drug against any medical conditions, some experimental studies must be performed in the laboratory in order to assess the effectiveness of that chemical or method. Otherwise, physicians can not trust them to prescribe for their patients.
In the other hand, doctors are concerned about the detrimental effect of such complementary forms of medicine. As a matter of fact, on some occasion, some unapproved medications contain of a few poisonous chemicals which might have detrimental effects on the function of other organs. To exemplify, some research has shown that the use of some herbal medications in a high dosage can detrimentally fail the function of liver and kidney as the poisonous.
To conclude, todays, with the development of medical science, individuals should be received the medications whose be authorized with the validated medical organizations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 171, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...th the validated medical organizations.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, in fact, as a matter of fact, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65919282511 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23159436744 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609865470852 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5806530918 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.727272727 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12542185061 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494256400299 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381926835671 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804963241587 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509846121919 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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