Social Media has helped us increase our virtual networks. This has isolated us physically, making us socially awkward in person.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Yes, I completely agree that people are becoming socially awkward and alone by the use of social networking sites, however, social media has enhanced our virtual circle with the people of various parts of the world. This essay will concentrate first on the fact that from the past few years, developments in the communication industry make this possible and then focus on the change of behavior in the people by the use of social networking sites.
To embark on, with the development in technology, easy access to the internet, and smartphones is possible now. Because of this, the feeling of pleasure and remaining up-to-date has been generated in humans. Various applications and sites are being developed with handy features to ensure its maximum usage by people. For example, the use of the Tik-Tok app has been tremendously increased for a few years and has kept people busy in generating unuseful content.
Second, because of the immense use of social media, a change in human behavior has been observed. People feel more comfortable scrolling on smart electronic gadgets for the entire day. This generates social awkwardness among individuals and makes them socially isolated. For example, now we are in the habit to find a solution to every problem in life from Google and YouTube, but we seldom ask for solutions from our parents or friends. This results in a loss of social connection with our very surroundings.
To conclude, I agree that social media has played a noticeable role in connecting virtually with the world, but it has been isolating us from our social circle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11877394636 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97731966827 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574712643678 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7517788413 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.333333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278872664062 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101648840094 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108438005225 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189574587069 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112456225047 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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