Social Media websites have amassed large user bases, and have become the sole source of information for their users.
Do the advantages of being a part of a social media site outweigh the disadvantages?
Today their is a huge shift in resources of how we communicate and learn new things daily on the internet, one such popular culture is social media websites which not only has huge user base but also has lot of content for it's users to explore. In my opinion there are very few negatives than positives.
Firstly, to get in touch with friends and family anywhere around the world we use social media as a most essential tool this days. For instance, if I want to talk to my parents across the globe I can connect with them on app called Whatsapp instantly this feature is not only convienent to use but also saves lot of money on phone bills because this app runs on internet subscription. In addition, You-Tube is one such tool which also has a large user base where you can watch, learn and create lot of valueable content to large section of audeince. As a result, we see so many creative vlogs represneting their vibrant cultures and also helpful to instantly get in tocuh with with our family from anywhere in the world.
Secondly, one huge drawback of this growing popularity of social media is data theft, we in many ways are vunerable to this. To put it in other words this social media websites run a targeted ads to your user profile by extracting your data with advanced tools, many reserchers around the world had came to a conclusion that tech giants like Facebook and Gooogle try to sell our data to third party user which makes us unsafe. For example, If you search for a product on Google it will create a alret of it try to run the targeted ads belong to that search in all the browsing sites and make lot of money ou of it in the name of user experience and create a indirect risk to your privacy.
To conclude, I would say having a social platform is very essential for us to grow professionely and it also enhances our horizons. In order to make users safe governments around the world need to mandate social media laws more strictly so people feel more safer to use and get most out of it.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2020-12-11 | Chirag Bhardwaj | 73 | view |
| 2020-11-16 | jobjp37 | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
Today their is a huge shift in resources of how we ...
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Line 2, column 121, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...e social media as a most essential tool this days. For instance, if I want to talk t...
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Line 2, column 672, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: with
... also helpful to instantly get in tocuh with with our family from anywhere in the world. ...
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Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
...s, many reserchers around the world had came to a conclusion that tech giants like F...
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Line 3, column 493, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... for a product on Google it will create a alret of it try to run the targeted ads...
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Line 3, column 656, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... the name of user experience and create a indirect risk to your privacy. To conc...
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Line 4, column 252, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'safer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: safer
...media laws more strictly so people feel more safer to use and get most out of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41935483871 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36979099367 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521505376344 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.2196082902 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.454545455 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8181818182 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9090909091 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23782578286 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891227232433 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596347627129 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157293991851 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389461225279 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.95 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.