Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantageous and disadvantageous of solar energy?

Energy is more valuable source around the world. Among of them solar power have been used by more people for their domestic purpose in many countries. Lot of couses have been faced for this situation, which nowadays people are tend. Furthermore, thes leads some advantages while drawbacks.
Firstly, considering some facts ,which rise
this situation, it is not a suddun onset but also a result which long time had been happened. In other word, the ending of natural fuiel, the expensive of other energy products and increasing environment pollution are major facts which lead to becoming more popular.
Furthermore, as advantages it brings more benifits to as domestic function. Owing to, there is no more money to expenses, the women who could easy to assit this power as other energy. No any bill payment regularly doing, could be sell to goverment to cash, and there is no dangiours to using this perticuler method also no any environment pollution. Thus this power is more greatful rather than othaer energy.
However, as drawbacks, some time to beginning the prosses may be expenses considerable initial payment, should be sun shaing climate every day, could not be store long time period maximam two or three days only.
In conclusion, solar enargy becoming more populer around the world nowadays, with lot of advantages and minimal disadvantages. When compaering all the facts I completly agree with this newly method due to it leads more benifits to household activities and stratergy to crate a new world.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS General Training

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 32, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...backs. Firstly, considering some facts ,which rise this situation, it is not a ...
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Line 4, column 122, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to, there is no more money to expenses, the women who could easy to assit this p...
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Line 4, column 186, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: Now
...sy to assit this power as other energy. No any bill payment regularly doing, could...
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Line 4, column 322, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...rs to using this perticuler method also no any environment pollution. Thus this po...
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Line 4, column 352, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...thod also no any environment pollution. Thus this power is more greatful rather than...
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Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'sunned'?
Suggestion: sunned
...considerable initial payment, should be sun shaing climate every day, could not be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, while, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10843373494 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62046269362 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614457831325 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4158779552 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8461538462 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297981154577 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117662643043 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119702791248 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127670481989 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103620843432 0.056905535591 182% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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