In Contemporary era, we are living in a world which is a Global Village. People having different beliefs and community are residing all over the world. But peaceful co-existence of this multilingual or multicultural communities has become very uncommon now-a-days. Recently, communal riots brought about by land dispute, occured in Lyton province in U.S. Aftermath this incident, curfew was imposed not only in Lyton area but also in the other areas of U.S. The result was that, the government has to impose certain restrictions on movement of teenagers after 8 pm. According to me this is the much needed step by the local government.
As we all know youngsters are more sensitive to these kind of incidents, so it becomes imperative for their parents to be more attentive towards their children. Being a soft target, teenagers are more prone to be negatively affected during this type of atmosphere. However, the local administration and the police has a lot to do at this point of time. Maintaining good law and order conditions during curfew can also prevent young children from any mishappening.
Although many people say that these kind of restrictions might affect teenagers' freedom. But, I think safety should be given paramount importance. There is recent incident that took place in Kushinagar area of India, where due to communal riots 15 years old child had to face mob lynching. Moreover, if young minds comes in contact with miscreants or people with radical ideology that might brain wash the child and they may induldge in activities that are not good for them as well as for society.
To encapsulate, I would say, teenagers are the future of any country, we should treat them as our assets and try to create an environment that is suitable for their development. So, parents has to be more vigilant, and side by side, local government has to ensure that their policies are in line for the best of young children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...ns on movement of teenagers after 8 pm. According to me this is the much needed step by the loc...
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...l know youngsters are more sensitive to these kind of incidents, so it becomes imperative ...
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...oung children from any mishappening. Although many people say that these kind of rest...
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...ening. Although many people say that these kind of restrictions might affect teenagers ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'minds'' or 'mind's'?
Suggestion: minds'; mind's
...o face mob lynching. Moreover, if young minds comes in contact with miscreants or peo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, as for, as to, i think, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96615384615 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79965509287 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5490385396 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.6 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134437533212 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411343645005 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032203317672 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.074239606447 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290195537132 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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