In today's world, it is apparent that violence has become pervasive considering various factors; significantly, religious and social reasons. Irrespective of geography, this sort of situation is inclined to have the deepest effect on the younger generation than on any other age group because of their vulnerability and sensitive thinking. Consequently, making parenting a teen an arduous task. In this essay, the challenges faced by teenagers and their families during an emergency will be discussed.
To being with, there are myriad of issues going on around the globe that are creating imbalances in the society; especially in the multi-cultural and modern environments like the United States. As a result of this uncertainty, governments are forced to restrict the freedom of its citizens to a certain level to ensure their safety at all times. At times, conditions can become savage and lead to situations where authorities expect teenagers to have an elderly person from his family as an escort which in societies like the USA and UK can be considered harsh on youngsters and families too because of the freedom the western style of parenting offers to the children.
Young ones may not be able to understand the seriousness of the ban and the perilous circumstances it can put them into if they do not comply with the rules; particularly at nights. As an example, in the countries like Iraq and Palestine, there are a plethora of reports along with supporting evidence of vandalism and extreme behavior of youth in the late nights; however, it has been noticed through security-cameras which taken seriously by the legal system can lead to undesirable effects on the life and career of the youth in subject.
In conclusion, legal bodies constraining teenagers and their families to follow strict code during any unstable situations in the state can save the governments from being regretful of any unexpected occurrences in the future, thereby saving the lives and aspirations of younger citizens. Irrespective of country or culture, it is the duty of elders and the government institutions to keep their children shielded in every adversary following few preventive measures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, may, so, in conclusion, sort of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24501424501 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04027985498 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595441595442 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.8043467363 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.363636364 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.9090909091 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11918219062 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443370605522 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364863958216 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0687469669434 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266490503306 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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