In the modern world, technology has grown by leaps and bound. In particular, communication has become faster, simpler and cheaper, that makes it easier to connect with people across the world seamlessly. Having said that, few argue that such technological development has caused people to become socially isolated and inactive, whereas some people object to this view. Even I to agree with the former's view and this essay will discuss both these viewpoint in detail and support my opinion with examples.
It is an undeniable fact that the revolution in communication technology is certainly a boom to society. Especially, With the latest advancement such as 4G internet and sophisticated mobile technology, just a click of a button is enough to connect with people in any part of the world through even video calls. While mobile applications such as Facebook and Whats app allow us to socialize with our personal circle, platforms such as Linkedin enables us to connect with our professional network to explore better opportunities. Despite its contribution to several positive developments, the fact that people spend most of their time with these electronic gadgets is totally undeniable, and that is really a serious social concern.
Technology distanced people from each other at home and workplace physically. For example, people barely interact with someone around them. The main reason for this undesirable trend is that such people are either responding to someone via text or attending calls on their mobile phones. Moreover, people nowadays even refuse to talk or participate in public gatherings which is one of the adverse effects the above said high-end technological developments. For example, one of the regional daily contains an article about how modern-day kids are affected socially in the era of the internet. It emphasizes the fact that kids engross themselves in smartphones, eventually becoming virtually social.
In conclusion, although the latest technological advancement has contributed to countless benefit to the community as a whole, the adverse effect it has on the social life of the present generation cannot be disregarded. Unless people use technology wisely, they may end up allowing it to exploit them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this viewpoint' or 'these viewpoints'?
Suggestion: this viewpoint; these viewpoints
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Suggestion: What's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, really, so, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1922.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41408450704 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97317772035 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591549295775 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0524504618 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.125 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1875 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199126476009 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661112891333 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412769236633 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121275748473 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539243017769 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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