Some believe that people who do physical work should be paid on par with the people who have a high-level degree.
Do you agree or disagree?
According to some the wages of people should be equal irrespective of their qualification and job type. I completely disagree with the argument as different jobs require different qualifications.
To begin with, the salary for a job depends on the job type and the number of people who qualify for the job. Take for example for a job of janitor thousands of people are eligible while for a post of doctors only a few hundred are eligible. So the salary varies with the level of competition and for a high earning job one has to compete for the post.
Moreover, the skilled jobs offer a handsome salary in comparison to unskilled jobs because for a skilled one has to earn experience. Moreover, jobs like farm labour do not need a degree or diploma and anybody who is physically fit can do these jobs. In contrast, skilled jobs require a particular qualification and work experience. Therefore, if the salaries of both skilled and unskilled jobs would be the same, nobody would care to learn a skill because of financial benefit.
Lastly, the salary of a job depends on the type of duty assigned. For instance, in nuclear plants, all the tasks are done under the supervision of senior engineers and safety of all workers is their responsibility. It is a tough job even it does not require physical labour. Therefore the job with high pay packages often come with greater responsibility.
In conclusion, in my opinion, the salaries of jobs should be fixed depending upon the responsibilities so that only the suitable candidates join jobs like doctor or engineers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Line 7, column 276, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...en it does not require physical labour. Therefore the job with high pay packages often co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, moreover, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87686567164 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93336509219 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533582089552 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.327801266 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3571428571 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152394220849 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618969030481 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557240964432 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896240522186 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397014915171 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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