In some cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem.
What are causes of this? What actions may be taken?
(improved)
Growing number of cars leads to congested streets and roads, in particular, in megalopolises has indeed become a grave problem in recent decades. Below some factors that caused the situation in question will be discussed in detail and some possible solutions will be given.
To begin with, worsening situation with traffic in many urban areas is created by many factors but the most crucial one is probably inefficient usage of private vehicles. Those who adhere to this prospect have buttressed it by statistical data that has being collected in the USA, China and the EU. The researchers claim that 81% of all commuters travel alone and avoid taking passengers; moreover, private automobiles stayed idle on parking spaces, often along streets, 88% of time. It need not say that that leads to overcrowded streets that are filled with moving and parked cars.
However, sharing cars is a new, promising policy that has been designed to tackle the traffic jams. The initiative has been promoted and implemented by governments of the USA and some EU members. Now a positive impact on the traffic in some areas has become apparent: the number of cars used has fallen steadily and it is needless to say that the fewer automobiles are used, the less congested streets become. Consequently, if governments of other countries establish similar practices, the traffic problems might be alleviated significantly and quickly.
Finally, the development of driveless vehicles may probably solve the issue completely. If a novice technology that have being developed by such mighty companies as Uber and Google become legal and widespread, dwellers of megacities may forget about jammed roads in the nearest future. Those who work in Uber on the project believe that those automatic cars would cause a new revolution in transport and two major causes that have been discussed above will be resolved: the driveless autos need not be parked in residential areas as well as one car could be used by many individuals to travel. So, it seems that traffic jams have no future in the world of driveless cars.
To sum up, congested roads is a ubiquitous and troublesome issue in many parts of the today’s world but the situation might be lessened by novel, efficient policies which encourage sharing of vehicles and the problem could be completely solved by the advent of the technology of autonomous cars.
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Essay evaluation report
It need not say that that leads to overcrowded streets that are filled with moving and parked cars.
Description: never put two clauses in one sentence
If a novice technology that have being developed
If a novice technology that has being developed
Sentence: So, it seems that traffic jams have no future in the world of driveless cars.
Error: driveless Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
still have transition issues, see the comments here:
http://www.testbig.com/ielts-writing-task-ii-ielts-general-training-ess…
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Don' repeat something in one essay, like:
It need not say that ...
it is needless to say that...
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 393 350
No. of Characters: 1951 1500
No. of Different Words: 203 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.452 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.964 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.683 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 140 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 106 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 75 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 55 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.2 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.183 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.323 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.584 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.044 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 470, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e been discussed above will be resolved: the driveless autos need not be parked i...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, in particular, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2011.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11704834606 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75182340153 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539440203562 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.6896612769 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.066666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173433856496 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549683147331 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338672526512 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950656174819 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249556699675 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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