Nowadays, there are more organizations begin to provide the formal clothing for their employee to wear at work. People have different views whether companies should command on their employees for wearing the uniform. I believe that the benefits of wearing a uniform are outweigh its disadvantages.
There are various benefits for the staffs to wear the uniform at work. Firstly, they don’t need to worry what to wear for work, it seen frustrated to decide what to wear everyday morning but it won’t happened if the company is provide a uniform. Secondly, it performs a significant symbol of company that present a tidy and consistent vision for the customers. The different style of uniform is presented the cultural or fashion style of company that customer are easily identity the branch of company. For example, Airline Company that people can easily recognize the breach of company through the uniform. In addition, people have different taste of wearing style and it might looks weird to others when someone is wearing inappropriate clothe at work.
However, some companies are not provided free uniforms for their employees, so they have to pay the cost in order to start their working. Some employees are basic working in the office and they don’t need to go out to meet the customer. It seem unfair to pay the cost for certain cloth that employee are force to purchase in order to follow the policy. Moreover, some company provides the poor quality of uniforms so employee can feel uncomfortable during the work and it can cause the working efficiency. Moreover, some people, especially females, are more likely to wear their personal clothes not only it is comfort but also have more chance to show their taste of style at work.
In conclusion, there are more and more company began to establish that uniform policy not only it is the symbol of company but also to present a consistent vision for the customer and I believe that the benefit of wearing uniform are outweigh its negatives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outweighed'.
Suggestion: outweighed
...t the benefits of wearing a uniform are outweigh its disadvantages. There are various...
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Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[4]
Message: The verb 'won't' requires base form of this verb: 'happen'
Suggestion: happen
...t to wear everyday morning but it won’t happened if the company is provide a uniform. Se...
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Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
...but it won’t happened if the company is provide a uniform. Secondly, it performs a sign...
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Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seems'?
Suggestion: seems
...need to go out to meet the customer. It seem unfair to pay the cost for certain clot...
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Line 5, column 507, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nd it can cause the working efficiency. Moreover, some people, especially females, are m...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to show their taste of style at work. In conclusion, there are more and more c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9762611276 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56115920888 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451038575668 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1451978497 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.8 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229542213856 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995419935181 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562294894589 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158873334463 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265750809546 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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