In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness is decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
In many areas around the world the percentage of people who are overweight is rising. Whereas, the amount of exercising and levels of health are decreasing in general. In this essay some of the problems will be addressed associated with proposed solutions.
First of all, people spend long hours in their work which lead them to relay on fast food rather than healthy meals. ready meals nowadays are ubiquitous This because they are affordable and easy to prepare, but, it is full of calories and fats which increasing the levels of obesity and sending a dire warning about further problems might happen in latter. For example, The Daley Mail newspaper made an survey comparing between the UK citizens who tend to buy from MacDonald's to those prefer home cooking food, surprisegly MacDonald's customers outnumbered by threefold. One solution is the government foster an advertising campaign showing the hazourdes of fast food.
Secondly, because of the technological advent in every aspect of our lives such transportation lead to less movement, In other means, everyone nowadays use their private cars or public transportions even for a walk distance trip. For instance, my brother who lives in nearby neighborhood always chose to take an Uber car to visit our parents instead of a brisk walk. If people go for walk or cycling as alternatives that would be better for health, nevertheless, will burn a lot of fats.
In conclusion, the accelerating world we live in does not leave enough time to observe our health, but other measures can be used as natural food and using bicycles rather than cars.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06766917293 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74204248554 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684210526316 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6327787815 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.545454545 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5454545455 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118871516269 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453086639916 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034515894142 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735280457461 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315112359197 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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