In some countries in Europe, some children from the age of 11 or 13 go to schools to learn more practical skills that will help them get a job. Other children stay in schools which provide a more general academic education.
What should schools do to prepare students for the world of work?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
In today cut throat competition children has to be strong and patient to tackle every situation in their walk of life. Things should be taught in early phase so that offspring learn how to react towards unfamiliar circumstances. School is a formidable party of child life. In this notion that school should teach how the next generation can become more patient and independent for their future endeavor.
competition is everywhere, if we talk about job,education, salary,status everything hold some part of it one and another way. Despite that fact that, children are two small to understand these situations. Many educational institutes in european country provide practical skill to get a job. To some extent In this deliberation to be familiar with current work environment is utmost. Children between the age group of 11-20 are found more aggressive according a survey and addition to this more attention should be pay toward their state of mind, confidence and how to express and feel about the competitions.
To embark on it, a sadly incident happened in one of the most well know school of India. A class 12 student had murdered a student of class 4 in order to cancel the final exam. However no one can believe that a minor can have such kind of mental state.
On the basis of above closure, I would stay children should be taught by their parents and teacher to be more patient about the situations they face in their school, work place. Advantage and disadvantage should be shared with the children if we give then any lesson over how to survive in today fast moving world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, well, as to, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89705882353 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71442067204 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.929252777 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1428571429 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279408451708 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082820469676 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580747384607 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150892784968 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885626807786 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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