In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside big cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
Today, the question of whether should governments encourage industries and businesses to relocate outside big cities. Although this trend is not without advantages, its downsides are more significant.
There is a multitude of manifest advantages of the relocation of businesses. It is evidence that moving factories to remote areas enables businesses to reduce the manufacturing cost. Specifically, in remote areas, there is a lot of vacant land for the plant and office. In addition, the rental price in these areas is much cheaper than in big cities. On the other hand, relocating businesses in remote areas will create more job opportunities for the locals and also raise their quality of life. Moreover, resettle businesses far away from densely populated places can put a strain on cities’ facilities and infrastructure. For example, traffic congestion, hospital and school overload are alleviated.
Nevertheless, under no circumstance should the relocation of industries demerits be overlooked. The relocation of businesses in rural areas will inevitably affect their profits due to the lost connection with their customers and suppliers. Consequently, this hinders these businesses to maximize their profit. Unskilled labor, on the other hand, is another factor that affects the quality of production. Companies will hire the majority of low qualified workers because of the lack of professional labor in rural areas. Likewise, the poor infrastructure and facilities in remote areas make the ideas of relocation less attractive. Entrepreneurs will find it hard to start-up business in remote areas where they have to deal with a host of issues such as inadequate security, lack of transportation, etc.
In conclusion, while the positive aspects of businesses’resettle are recognized, these pale into insignificance when compared to the drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
Today, the question of whether should governments encourage industries...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ficance when compared to the drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, likewise, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68928571429 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39432111273 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610714285714 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4820337056 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.7058823529 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4705882353 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35294117647 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217805831465 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660012892403 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074356607079 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140954505688 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101294425181 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.