In some countries it is now illegal to reject someone applying for a job because of his or her age.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
There are countries where rejecting people’s job application because of their age is not legal. While such rule should not be applicable for some works, however, I believe that it is a positive change.
Some people are against changes in the age limit because it may distract young people from showing interest in the education. As they will allow to work, many may use it for their advantage and refuse to study and start working to support themselves. Thus, lack of education will have negative consequences in their future life as they may have hard time to advance in their work without proper education.
Nonetheless, eliminating age limit help youngsters to embark on their career at the very young age. Today, many schools offer classes that cover university level courses. Because of this fact people at the age of 16 or 17 have basic knowledge in some areas and can be suitable for the entry positions to gain experience. By working in some jobs young people get better change whether the job they want to work is suitable for them or they should follow another field. Consequently, early experience allows youngsters to gain experience and determine if this work is fitted for them before following it at the university.
In conclusion, although early career may distract young people from going to universities, they can gain experience and determine whether their chosen career fit their desire. Consequently, in such case youngsters get a chance to gain university education in the area which are interesting for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: much may; a good deal of may
... education. As they will allow to work, many may use it for their advantage and refuse t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, thus, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05098039216 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69567269674 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552941176471 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7907923167 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169800272894 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735899722415 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651290533121 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117587654166 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791931799169 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.