In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
A segment of society these days prefers residing in many nations. In my opinion, this is an unfavorable situation, because it is causing the problem of social isolation and making people inefficient.
To embark upon, people who choose to live alone generally face the issue of loneliness. In other words, they do not have anybody to talk at home and have to take the day-to-day decisions on their own. Even on problematic days, they have to solve all the problems without the support of anybody else. This makes their life stressful and sometimes worsens their condition to cause mental illnesses such as depression and anxiety. My friend, for instance, decided to stay alone and later on, he started to feel lonely at home, which caused several issues in his life and ultimately made him regret for that decision.
Moreover, the decision of isolated dwelling also increases inefficiency in people. Living with the family has numerous benefits as all family members share the household duties, which enable each of them to focus on their studies and office work comfortably. Nevertheless, while in solo living they do not have anyone else and they have to perform all the household chores by themselves, which consequently affects their education and employment. To illustrate, as the report of the Human Development Institute of India, the people who stay with family are 40 % more efficient than those who remains in isolation.
In conclusion, a portion of society these days indeed prefer to be alone at home, however, this is a detrimental trend as it is isolating people from society and making them unproductive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m society and making them unproductive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0936329588 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7398123329 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621722846442 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.230647565 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157494612586 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550201651926 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049216460637 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911142611495 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00460595576364 0.056905535591 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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