In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think a positive or negative development.
It is true that living independently is becoming rapidly prevalent in present-day society. Although there are some perks of this trend, I ponder it to be a drawbacks development overall.
The main benefit of this phenomenon is that some people who opt to live alone may become more independent than those who live with their families. It has demonstrated that they could cook, clean, or manage time and money by themself. Furthermore, people can look after others from their self-experience. All of which are valuable life skills. Therefore, an increase in the number of individuals can be seen as a positive development.
Despite the benefits mentioned above, I assess that this is a negative trend for various reasons. The first one is that people who live apart from family members will be felt loneliness, stress, and worries. This is because people don't see face to face with relatives and receive support about positive emotions from them as these days live together. In addition, from the financial point of view, the people who live alone have to face costly bills for house rent, daily food, and shopping in city life. This means that if they don't have the ability to cover their basic need they would negatively think and effortlessly give up. For instance, nowadays, a lot of students have been working a part-time job with a salary almost equal to house rent. Thus extremely challenging to live without guarders
In conclusion, while I recognize the advantages of this development, I believe that the disadvantages are more significant.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, while, apart from, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06225680934 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80905826555 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63813229572 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5580152565 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9285714286 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199063396272 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585554007258 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510157199276 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106318898542 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453528397948 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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