In some countries, many people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past.Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Essay topics:

In some countries, many people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In this day and age, the trend of living alone has increased significantly as compared to the past decades. As far as I am concerned, the trend could have both positive and negative development in this statement.

The positive of living alone is relatively obvious. One such benefit is that individuals can become more independent. Without any financial assistances from family, individuals will need to learn and proceed everything by themselves, such as cooking, cleaning, time management, and paying the utilities, all of which are valuable life skills. Secondly, from an economic perspective, a growing number of people prefer to live by themselves will result in an increase demand for housing. This definitely encourages construction industries to build more houses and apartments to satisfy the need of people.

However, there are opposing voices saying this trend is a negative development. First and foremost, individuals will tend to alienate with family. As living in this competitive society, young people have to work harder to support their lives and goal achievements. Consequently, the communication and interaction will be reduced with family. Secondly, and most obviously, from the financial point of view, a rise in demand of housing is likely to push up the price of the rent and properties. While this may benefit for some business, a number of residents, including those who live alone, burden will be increased.

In conclusion, while there are two distinctive spectrums to both positives and negatives development, but the positives clearly outweigh the negatives based on the article above. Therefore, I strongly believe that live alone is more instrumental

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Average: 5.4 (4 votes)

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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'in conclusion', 'such as']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.233333333333 0.247107183377 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.153333333333 0.155533422707 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0733333333333 0.0946595960268 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.06 0.0501214627716 120% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0166666666667 0.0437548338989 38% => OK
Prepositions: 0.113333333333 0.122226691241 93% => OK
Participles: 0.04 0.0403226058552 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.06098528321 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0333333333333 0.0326793684256 102% => OK
Particles: 0.00333333333333 0.00163938923432 203% => OK
Determiners: 0.103333333333 0.0861772015684 120% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0266666666667 0.021408717616 125% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00666666666667 0.011925033212 56% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1691.0 1933.35771543 87% => OK
No of words: 263.0 316.048096192 83% => OK
Chars per words: 6.42965779468 6.12580529183 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.403041825095 0.374742101984 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.32319391635 0.28420135186 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.25855513308 0.203846283523 127% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.190114068441 0.137316102897 138% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06098528321 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.037074148 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604562737643 0.56093040696 108% => OK
Word variations: 64.442724451 60.7387585426 106% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.5333333333 20.7743622355 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0701879986 49.517814964 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.733333333 127.492653851 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.7743622355 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.866666666667 0.814263465372 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 49.8527249683 49.1944974215 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.68115942029 1.69124875643 99% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307105186882 0.332605444948 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0785222453904 0.102741220458 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0627959308431 0.0668466124924 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.485107537668 0.534860350844 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.181498524394 0.148594505496 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11975577372 0.134430193775 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579295018673 0.0742795772207 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.299128849354 0.324371583561 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0926598799182 0.0638462369009 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217411077599 0.228012699653 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278152402071 0.058150111329 48% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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