In some countries more and more young people are choosing to live on their own.What do you think are the reasons for this? Is it a negative or positive trend? Give examples from your own knowledge.
In the present scenario,across the globe the globe the younger individuals choose to lead an independent life. In fact,it gives them plenty of freedom and helps in their overall personality development. This essay will discuss the merits and demerits of this convention and why it can benefit the person as a whole.
To commence with, independence always gives a sense of freedom. To be more precise, when people live alone, they can choose the way they want to lead their lives, starting from the mere household matters to the important life changing decisions. Moreover, this make them capable to face any situation during their life. For instance, a recent survey in UK shows that children who live on their own deal with the hardships effectively when compared to those living with the family. Hence, without a shadow of skepticism one can say that such practices play a pivotal role in moulding a person.
On the one hand, some connoisseurs assert that it always boosts the self-confidence and makes one responsible. In other words, living independently always gives a person ample of opportunities to deal with plethora of tasks on daily basis and thus there is no room to run away from the responsibilities. In addition, excelling in these will increase their confidence on themselves. To illustrate, a famous businessman in India, Dr.Anil Ambani once stated that living by himself at a very early age has helped in the success of all the ventures.Therefore, aspirants of this, group advocates and glorify this growing trend.
On the other hand, youngsters tent to make mistakes easily. Similarly, if they are not properly guided they can be disoriented and unfocused. Thus, it can have a detrimental effect in spite of the advantages.
To recapitulate,it is the personal choice of a human being to choose their lifestyle. Unlike the past, more people are self-made and enjoy it as they are free to choose their living. Although such liberation can pose various ill effects among the younger people, I personally believe it greatly helps in their character formation and make them more responsible and confident.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in fact, in other words, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13180515759 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99312161823 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595988538682 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7688654705 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3888888889 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201998480932 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544835037272 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460682171758 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100745205905 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614346946863 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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