These days, many people assume that staying in a rented apartment has been the best selection. This essay will consider both merits and demerits of this trend.
On the one hand, there are many benefits of renting an apartment. The first one is that people can live independently. This will offer them wonderful chances to handle most problems by themselves, contributing to becoming more mature. The second advantage is affordability. Because the rent fee takes a small amount of money compared to buying a house, it is more accessible to live in rented accommodation. As a result, people can utilize the rest of their wealth for present investments that might allow them to gain massive amounts of money in the future.
On the other hand, I believe that the drawbacks of this trend should be taken into consideration. Firstly, owning a house provides the owner with a sense of personal triumph that tenants never enjoy. As years passed, the price of the house will increase dramatically. The landlord can rent the house, leading to a steady source of earning. Moreover, renters will have trouble either reconstructing or redesigning accommodation the way they like. By contrast, the landlord has the legal rights to renovate his house like the installation of a pool.
In conclusion, I reaffirm that although renting a flat have a couple of abovementioned advantages, the overall freedom and monetary compensations house owners enjoy are of paramount significance, and this is why all tenants dream to have their own house.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, so, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08764940239 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95853150803 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625498007968 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.4630117567 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1333333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214321812956 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676403908145 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548310799873 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114388746846 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578190382502 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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