In some countries people of all ages place extra emphasis on sports and exercising. Do you think it is a positive development? Give your opinion and relevant examples from your own experience.
it is an undeniable fact that the prevalence of sports and exercising has been surging continuously in many nations around the globe in contemporary time. In my opinion, this scenario has a plethora of merits and hence is a constructive development. The reasons for my perception are elucidated in ensuing paragraphs.
The foremost reason for my belief is that modern sports involve physical activity that improve one's health. In other words, outdoor activities not only ameliorate people's fitness but also reduce the stress of their daily life as such sporting activities bifurcate one's focus from daily hurdles and can enjoy freely with friends. Additionally, major sports require more than one individual to play and hence, it also proliferate one's social circle and eventually one can get myriads of benefits by working in team.
Furthermore, involvement in some physical exercise is also proven beneficial in this competitive world. As people are swamped with daily tasks, sometimes they have paucity of time to even prepare food and in turn, nowadays general public consume fast food more than ever and as it is rich in fat and sugar, it is quite advantageous for citizens to do some exercise to mitigate the issues they might incidentally get by eating processed foods. In addition, as per a survey conducted by Canadian Atlantic newspaper, people that follow a strict regime of performing exercise has better stamina and caliber compare to the counterparts.
To summarise and recapitulate, it can be deduced from aforementioned deliberation that there are plenty of merits associated with sports and exercise such as alleviate one's stress and burgeon one's physical and mental capabilities. Therefore, a person should always spare some time to perform such activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, incidentally, so, therefore, in addition, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32978723404 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93410735429 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617021276596 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.3533003097 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.636363636 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6363636364 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.084229812919 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03072749817 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0139267797364 0.0667982634062 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0490547356334 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00795611090665 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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