In some countries people prefer to rent a house for accommodation while in other countries people prefer to buy their own house for living Does renting a house have more advantages or disadvantages than buying a house

Essay topics:

In some countries, people prefer to rent a house for accommodation while in other countries, people prefer to buy their own house for living. Does renting a house have more advantages or disadvantages than buying a house

house is considered as a heaven for everyone, as many people like own house as other part of people prefer rental house for living, here i would like to explain disadvantages of rent house and advantages of buying a house,

on the one hand, some country people believe that rented house has many disadvantages, owning rented house need to accept lots of rules and regulations by the landlord, this will restrict people privacy and personal activities, for example, sometime landlord decided time of entry, using each items which is rented with home, water availability and Security checking, moreover may building owner not allowed outside friends to visit our house after particular time and may more than two people or family stay in single house, furthermore every month need to pay fixed amount to landlord, sometime if any additional work in building people need to pay additional amount, this may really effected monthly budget

on other hand, few people believe that earning own house is more beneficial to family, mainly living in own house, feel more relax, freedom to do anything in house and no rules and regulations, moreover owner can renovate house anytime without any permission, people will get more satisfaction while living in own house which is not getting from rented house, furthermore there is no time restrictions

in conclusion, i believe that there are more problems while living in rented house rather than living in own house, self-satisfaction and relaxation is most important things, then people prefer to go with own house if he can affordable.

Votes
Average: 6.3 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, moreover, really, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13953488372 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69349448957 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554263565891 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 258.0 20.2975951904 1271% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1326.0 106.682146367 1243% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 258.0 20.7667163134 1242% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 83.0 7.06120827912 1175% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.542538122864 0.244688304435 222% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.542538122864 0.084324248473 643% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.366103915864 0.151304729494 242% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104925382362 0.056905535591 184% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 131.8 13.0946893788 1007% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -198.85 50.2224549098 -396% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 105.1 11.3001002004 930% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.01 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 19.62 8.58950901804 228% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 105.2 10.1190380762 1040% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 59.0 10.7795591182 547% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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