In some countries, there are many social problems involving teenagers. Some people say this is because parents spend much time at work and not at home. Do you agree or disagree?
Teenagers are involved in several social problems in certain nations. Some people believe that parents not spending time with their children because of work is the main reason. I agree with this statement, however, I also believe that the media plays a contributing factor to this development.
To begin with, inability of parents to stay with their children is the obvious reason for this. This is to say that youngsters are not properly trained at home. Work schedule has overwhelmed father's and mothers, that they have little or no spare time for their words. Consequently, wrong choice of friends gives rise to a lot of social problems. For instance, the New York Police Department (N.Y.P.D.) in 2018, revealed that 90% of juvenile delinquencies are peer groups incited.
Furthermore, the media also has influence on this trend. Teenagers are very inquisitive and will likely want to imitate what they see. Hence, negative characters from the media can instigate problems. For example, the Internet offers all sort of information and entertainment. Nudity and crime can be copied from it. This affects young ones wrongly. In addition, entertainment ranging from music to video games are not exerted. Profanity can be adopted from uncensored lyrics and violence from gaming may incite them to carry these acts in real life. Therefore, alot of attention should be given to these young adults, if we want these issues resolved.
Overall, neglect from parents is a major root to this problem. Also, exposure to negativity in the media can also be a likely cause. Thus, young ones should be monitored strictly for their own protection.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is problem. Also, exposure to negativity in the media can also be a likely cause....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, sort of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14981273408 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67955476654 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629213483146 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8775481837 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.75 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.35 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17888577792 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526110201459 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767195260761 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120722781551 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100242538454 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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