In some cultures people give more value to old people while in other cultures people give more value to young people. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
Across the world, there are diverse cultures and each culture is unique to itself. Some cultures regard older people as a valuable asset to their society and in contrast some other cultures regard the younger generation as more value to their sorroundings. In my opinion, I am inclined to the former view as I was taught from an early age to respect and value elders as they are more experienced.
Nevertheless, older people "have been there and done that" but the energy and enthusiasm of the younger generation cannot be overlooked. For instance, the world now needs a new energy vibe and diverse thinking to take us forward which is more commonly found in the youth. As everyone is aware that planet earth is facing a crisis due to environmental issues and we have run out of ideas on how to deal with this future epidemic. Everyone looks forward to the youth for their out of the box thinking in tackling the problem and saving earth from destruction. The same energy level and thinking cannot be found in the older population.
Moreover, older people have gained high status in society and they are looked for advice. In nearly all cultures of the world, older generation is viewed as the foundation pillars of the society and children are taught to respect them from a very early age. It is very healthy that this is followed as generations are replaced in the cycle of life and these values are carried forward. In the case of younger generation, they learn a lot from older people and use that knowledge to excel in life.
Furthermore, the experience and wisdom cannot be overlooked in the older people. The older generation have lived the different phases of life and have gone through the ups and downs of life. They have gained experience in taking right and wrong decisions in life and have thus gained wisdom from it. For example, if younger people are faced with a critical decision in life, many times they are not able to take the correct and appropriate decision and they have to look up to their elders who can think of many pros and cons and advice accordingly.
To conclude, in my opinion, the world needs younger people for the energy and diverse thinking to take us forward but that cannot be done without the constant consultation and wisdom of older people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, for example, for instance, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74563591022 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50648874034 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461346633416 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.588390501 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.941176471 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5882352941 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169943701374 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598931519865 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656685276403 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116754681289 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10095673354 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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