“Some experts opine that a new language should be introduced for all countries for international communication.”
Do you think the benefits of introducing a new international language will outweigh the problems?
it is believed that one single language when invented will bring a positive impact on every country around the world in terms of global communication. this essay thinks that the drawbacks of having a newly-invented language do not outweigh the merits because, although it limits the variety of cultures and traditions of many nations, the time and money people spend to learn languages will be significantly reduced.
The introduction of a new international language system will remove many cultures around the world. this is because every language was originally created and developed during people’s daily lives, therefore, it represents a nation’s history and lifestyles. if a single communication system was invented, it would only gather a small number of cultures and leave out the rest resulting in the reduction of traditions’ variety. For example, beautiful vietnamese folk songs would most likely be forgotten if people in Vietnam stopped speaking their mother tongue because these songs would never sound nice when translated into another language.
In contrast, a substantial amount of money and time will be saved when global citizens have only one language. In order to travel or work in an international environment, people have to spend their hard-earned money and valuable time to study the language they need. they will have to study again if they decide to move to a different country which does not use the language they have learned. if a new language was introduced, people would only have to study once for the lifetime. For example, it is estimated that an average vietnamese spend around 21 hours per week and 3 million dongs per month to study a language. therefore, a unified system for international communication would bring a drastic benefit to everyone.
In conclusion, despite the fact that a newly-invented language can erase a big number of different cultures, global citizens will favor the introduction of an international communication system as they can save a lot of time and savings.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32515337423 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07691189412 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509202453988 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.9971529882 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.538461538 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260725513817 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987982459001 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522252478605 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152415427006 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406631334285 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.