Nowadays, some people have the feeling that the effects of advertising are positive for individuals and businesses, while others feel that the effects of advertising are negative for individuals and business.
On one hand, let us discuss about the positive effects of advertisements for individuals and businesses. The world population is about 7.5 billion people, so an individual that advertises himself or herself on social media platforms through sponsored ads will gain massive exposure. Individuals such as Music Artists, Comedians, Actors, Actresses, Presidents, Governors, House of Assembly Members, House of Rep Members, National Assembly Members and Local Government Chairmen can benefit from this kind of advert. In addition, businesses still gain exposure through these social media platforms. For instance, Nike can produce its latest product today and through advertisement everyone gets to know about it. All these are made possible because of adverts!
On the other hand, let's discuss about the negative effects of advertisement for individuals and businesses. People can give you a false image through advertisement because they can say whatever they like about themselves which is not necessarily who they are. In the case of businesses, adverts can prove to be a tool of luring unsuspecting victims to be scammed. Adverts do not guarantee that a products is original, so this can be an issue.
To conclude, my opinion towards the positive and negative effects of advertising for individuals and businesses is that we should focus more on the positive effects. At this point in history, adverts can only do us more good than harm.
- Your friend is visiting your town Write a letter to give him her some suggestions on places to visit and where to find cheap accommodations In your letter you should When the best time to visit your town is Where the interesting places to visit are Where 73
- Employers should focus on personal qualities over qualifications and experience when choosing someone for a job To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- The street where you live is very polluted Write to the local council and ask to act about this situation You should say What is the main problem How does it affect your street Give some suggestions and request action 61
- Water is a natural resource that should always be free Governments should ban the sale of bottled water To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- People nowadays work hard to buy more things This has made our life generally more comfortable but it is a pity many traditional values have been lost on the way to such materialism To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, still, while, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43410852713 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95231822839 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577519379845 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.672971099 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.833333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334347962932 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128338912098 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144970067565 0.0667982634062 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246545485826 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129566366258 0.056905535591 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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