The street where you live is very polluted Write to the local council and ask to act about this situation You should say What is the main problem How does it affect your street Give some suggestions and request action

Dear Sir

I'm writing this letter with regards to the environmental pollution on my street. Ututu is the largest street in the city of Umuahia. It consists of 100 buildings but we have very few dumpsters to accommodate the daily wastes from the residents.

Due to very few dumpsters available, wastes are littered all over the place. We also have different spots where piles of refuse can be seen and this is the cause of the major traffic we experience every day. The environment has become very unhealthy for residents because of the bad odour that comes from the piled trash. Since the refuse company doesn't clear the dumpster daily, the pile up of daily wastes from people breeds mosquitoes and this infects the residents.

My suggestion is that more dumpsters should be made available to accommodate the daily wastes. Nancy suggests that the refuse disposal company should employ more staff so they can be able to take away wastes from the area daily.

I hope you act on this as soon as possible.

Yours Faithfully,

Adam Grant

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96629213483 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47696113159 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64606741573 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6353485084 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3636363636 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149146443651 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061895993439 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486692415576 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106584198133 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522043462611 0.0580467560999 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.