Some feel that individuals should try to assimilate completely into the country where they live while others feel it is more important to preserve their native culture.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Nowadays, large numbers of people live in non-native countries to pursue their higher education as well as permanent settled with family. While living there and interact with original citizens, migrants understand and involve the foreign culture. In this essay I will going to elaborate the point of view in this context.
It has been noticed that since long time persons have been moving other developed countries, to cite an example, United States, United Kingdom, Canada, Australia, Germany, and other Europe countries. In addition to this, some professionals moved Gulf counties, like UAE, Dubai to earn the bread for their family members. Furthermore, while living in those areas human beings need to be understand their languages and way to speaking, also, etiquette, ethics are playing vital roles.
Some mankind believes that we should assimilate according to the atmosphere and situation. To illustrate, people start celebrating the ceremony, festivals, customs as well as they change their lifestyle according to new country. Initially they start from dresses, way to speak. Not only but also, such type of people uses native slang and pronunciation.
On the other hand, individuals pertain that we should not overlap the root value of home country. They still shadow the basic protocol of their homeland. To exemplify, they still prefer to celebrate native festivals, such Diwali, Holi, Durga Puja, Id. In addition to this, emigrants try to communicate with same community people. For instance, such kind individual inevitability recommending that their children should only marriage with same religion, and some time same caste.
In my viewpoint, we should create sustainable the logical bond between cutting edge era and home-grown thinking. Because if maintain the decorum of other country where we are living, we should understand their culture, ethics, way of interaction. While doing this we can easily adopt that country lifestyle as well as we should teach our next generation about native equates, languages, most important we should create hybrid environment at home so, kids can learn both culture. To conclude, in school of learning, I think both cultures are playing significant roll in our life, because homeland principles as well as non-native morals are very necessary for us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...stivals, such Diwali, Holi, Durga Puja, Id. In addition to this, emigrants try to ...
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Message: Did you mean 'significant role'?
Suggestion: significant role
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, still, well, while, for instance, i think, in addition, as well as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43611111111 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70584501075 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619444444444 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9412913602 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.722222222 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228864766915 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656820777034 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032555096845 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114227220454 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257817997133 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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