Some high schools have a requirement that students must complete a certain amount of volunteer work in order to graduate What do you think about this type of requirement Give details to support your opinion

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Some high schools have a requirement that students must complete a certain amount of volunteer work in order to graduate. What do you think about this type of requirement? Give details to support your opinion.

Education is not all about learning lessons, studying, and evaluating the abilities of students. It is more than that as experience is necessary. Most of the high schools has mandatory volunteering program. I agree that the students need both theoretical and experimental work. There are several reason why high school volunteer is needed. Firstly, it will be more effective to learn through studying and experiencing directly through being a volunteer. Secondly, as a high school stage students, this is the time to start experiencing the world and learn other different things that the student textbooks cannot provide. For example, doing some leadership works relating to a team will give the practical lessons of working with a group and the unity of people. Finally, students will be more open-minded, better communication and they will be able to practise the critical thinking about the reality world as well. Although the volunteer has advantages it should be under control which means the volunttering work should adjust between their capabilities and should not be mandatory things.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 172.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35465116279 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88476982987 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651162790698 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.545691344 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170068357251 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688582666278 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482320338239 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170068357251 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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