Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
Toys are one of the things that make our childhood memorable. Parents express their love on their offspring by showering them with toys. Whether children should have more toys or not is a moot point. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of pampering kids with toys.
On the bright side, toys serve as the best tool to boost the creativity, hand-eye co-ordination and memory of the youngster. For instance, puzzle games aid in increasing the memory power and building blocks improve innovation. Moreover, nowadays we find many educational toys that will serve as a launch pad for the children before entering school. Supporting this case, there are innumerable toys that will help the child learn alphabets, numbers and so on. Hence toys are instrumental in molding kids to be future ready.
However, there are a few disadvantages which may not be transparent, in having too many toys. In the first place, children who get everything they wish may grow up into adamant adults and may find it tough to cope up with failures in their future. This is generally because they are not habituated to refusal. Furthermore, on the social side, showering one kid with more toys may result in inferiority complex among other children and consequently, they may start to relate happiness to materialistic wealth.
In a nutshell, the quantity of toys that a kid possesses has a considerable effect in the child’s mentality and growth and it is crucial that parents pay attention to how many toys they buy their loved one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, may, moreover, so, for instance, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99609375 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75232667466 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6015625 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2436947345 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3571428571 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291709937826 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909157847251 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055281121949 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173359417989 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394526905741 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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