There are some parents who buy their children a large number of toys to play with. In my opinion, these parents are unknowingly committing an unfortunate mistake. I think that providing your child with innumerable choices to play with is a recipe for stunting his/her growth as an individual later in the formative years of life.
It is true that toys are an essential part of a child's life. They are a means to open an imaginary fantasy world that the child can gleefully indulge in. As such, toys have the potential to unlock, in a child's mind, the very creative powers that they can employ to shape their adult lives. Therefore, playing with various toys is fundamental for the child to build and choose his/her interests in general. Parents can take a cue from here and take important steps to nurture these particular interests so that the child may acquire a skill-set that he/she can hone upon as they grow and mature. This can be extremely helpful in building and settling into a career of one's choice during adulthood. Thus, it can be concluded that it is highly important to play and experiment with a number of toys during childhood.
On the other hand, having a large number of toys can, and they usually do, create problems with adequate growth of the child. Toys can build in a child an insatiable hunger for entertainment and indulgence. Parents, who give in to their child's demands and provide them news toys regularly, are teaching their child to surrender to temptation. As such, these children develop a habit of playing with toys for as long as it pleases them. They are not enjoying the toys as much as they are interested in trying out new stuff and leave it as soon as they get bored. With a large stock of toys to play with, the child is spoilt for choice, he/she cannot continue for one toy for long and is consequently prone to many ills such as poor attention span, mood swings, and throwing tantrums at the drop of a hat. Seeing this, the parents then supply the kid with another toy and the child gets pacified for the time being, only to begin with this vicious circle once again.
Therefore, I think that it is generally a bad idea to provide your child with a huge number of toys. Not only does this serves to spoil the habits of your child, its downright disastrous as far as healthy growth and maturation are concerned. Furthermore, such a practice makes the child susceptible to various psychological vulnerabilities. Thus, I believe it is best to let a child enjoy a limited set of toys.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, i think, in general, such as, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2083.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 450.0 315.596192385 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62888888889 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54724154845 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504444444444 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 634.5 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3341635786 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1904761905 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2380952381 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372822849374 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123040116064 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101373055372 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241062271225 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093637991598 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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