Some parents think that helping their children with homework is good Others think children should do their homework on their own Discuss both views and give your opinion

Homework is beneficial for students because they are learning different unique things very quickly. I believe that, sometimes school are giving to much burden on student in form of homework. So, parents are helping their children in homework. However, children should do their homework without any help also be good. This essay will discuss both the views.

Without any doubt, homework is a traditional method and one of the academic requirement. Nowadays, students are not having a time some extra and special activities such as sports because of burden of a homework and because of this reason, parents are helping their children in doing homework. Moreover, parent are gaining a knowledge about what their children study in the school. Furthermore, parents should know about their children weaknesses and strength because sometimes students are not able to find out their ability. So, doing a homework with child is one of a key to figure out their ability. Sometimes, child are also feel that, someone is around them and parents are much caring about them.

However, it is very important for children to do their homework freely without any types of help. Manytimes, not only school also parents are giving so much burden for doing homework and they are not able to show to creativity. Children need to some refreshment activity such as playing games which make their mind creative. So, after that activities they are do homework quickly as well as with more attention. Furthermore, child need a enjoy with homework without any pressure.

In conclusion, I believe that, parents are helping their children where they are lacking and should allow to do their homework freely without any load on mind.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'felt'.
Suggestion: felt
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11428571429 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5174898415 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467857142857 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1091985569 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2352941176 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4705882353 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.474804860321 0.244688304435 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187192839174 0.084324248473 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124330944065 0.0667982634062 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.352680184805 0.151304729494 233% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034351772204 0.056905535591 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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