In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing.
What problems is this causing?
What measures could be taken to counter this situation?
Nowadays historical special events, carnivals are getting extinct in multiple countries. I will be going to elaborate the causes of vanishing the ancient programs in this era.
Family ceremonies and events are playing significant role for human beings, it has been observed that while celebrating people enjoy their life with family members, friends, neighbors as well as colleagues. To cite an example, Diwali, Dussehra, Holi, Bhaiya Dooj, Raksha Bandhan festivals are very famous in India. People always try to make sure; they should be at home during the Diwali prayer.
Furthermore, these types of programs give immense feeling to all age human being. To fulfill their wishes, individuals start efforts to complete the project on time as well as most of military personnel’s plans their leaves on national festivals, to illustrate Diwali, Holi, Raksha Bandhan.
In contrast, younger generation are not giving importance to their native festivals, because they assume that it is wastage of time and money to celebrate old customs. Due to cutting edge technology, kids predict that it their family member should not spend capital on ceremonies. Specifically, Holi festival is extremely popular in North India. Persons are deliberately celebrating this occasion with close friends. Mature generation assume that, playing with colors is unhygienic, owing to this human being waste large quantity natural resources, to instance water. Also, they believe that while doing such practices people are harming the atmosphere.
In my viewpoint, we should forget the legacy and basic root of our culture. Although, we should maintain the decorum between people relationship. Especially, those cultural programs which very inevitable to familiarize with old generation, so, they can learn fundamental thing from ancient. To overcome these types of problem, firstly, we should make sure our children should interact with their grand-parents, extended family members. Secondly, we must emphasize to our kids to take participate in social programs, marriage ceremonies, contact with another community people and their age children. To conclude, I would particularly focus on sharing the information, stories, real examples basis on root culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 77, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e legacy and basic root of our culture. Although, we should maintain the decorum between...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, in contrast, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65088757396 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79415902796 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9296156239 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.526315789 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7894736842 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0754677525797 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0256599899253 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400871336123 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0478176380459 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409684446556 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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