Some people agree that children should ask for parent's advice. Some Disagree. Discuss both views and share your own opinion.
Children need guidance of their parents but do they necessarily always look for advice from them? There is a varying opinion on this subject matter and this essay will discuss the issue from both sides.
First of all, parents are the first teachers for the children and the most reliable ones. Moreover, they are selfless in the guidance they provide to their children. This often tempts children to approach them for their useful advice in a wide range of situations - from the simplest of act they perform to the most critical decisions they need to make in their life later. For instance, its common for children to ask their mother to advise them on what dress they should wear while going to a friend's birthday party and to ask suggestions from their father on what major to study at college. Constant tutelage from the parents make young people feel safe about their choices, even though they might be circumspect at times.
In contrary, there are some teenagers who are more daring and confident about themselves. This often makes them believe that the guidance from parents make them timid and limit their capabilities. These kinds of adolescents might go on to mature rather quickly and become self-dependent. Even recent studies suggest that young children who are disciplined but make right choices for themselves achieve greater success in life as it allows them to develop sophisticated social skills as well as problem solving ability in all situations.
Personally, I believe parents should not become overprotective and require their children to ask them for advice on all little things they do in life. Every child is born unique and by doing certain activities his own way, he is more likely to explore his inborn qualities. Also, if a child seems to take a liking for a particular sports or genre of music, he should feel free to enjoy it because after all what music or game someone plays should be entirely his own decision. For example, a boy who has a natural talent for basketball might end up playing cricket if his father thinks it is better for him to carry on the family tradition. There are certain areas indeed where it's not worth asking for intervention.
In conclusion, children who are more likely to comply with what their parents suggest them to do make them feel good about the trust in their endorsement. on the other hand, there are others who feel making choices independently enable them to become unique and reach their true potential. Taking an advice from the parents but not feeling obliged to comply with each of them probably is a compromise that can encourage him from making mature but less vulnerable decisions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 496, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'friends'' or 'friend's'?
Suggestion: friends'; friend's
...dress they should wear while going to a friends birthday party and to ask suggestions ...
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Line 3, column 518, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... while going to a friends birthday party and to ask suggestions from their father...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...d about the trust in their endorsement. on the other hand, there are others who fe...
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Line 9, column 298, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'advice'.
Suggestion: advice
... and reach their true potential. Taking an advice from the parents but not feeling oblige...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, after all, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 24.0651302605 229% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2218.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 454.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88546255507 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49891752921 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522026431718 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 680.4 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.269047538 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.736842105 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8947368421 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94736842105 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177150948163 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614238321138 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390527515587 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103166903483 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442474635923 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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