Some people are afraid to go out for fear of being robbed on the streets. Still, there are robberies that happen inside houses. What do you think is the best thing a person can do to ensure his/her own security? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">A couple of society's sectors are feeling unsecured going out timorous to find a thief on their ways, however, robberies occur even being at home. I am strongly convinced that folks should use personal and external security schemes. The aim of this essay is to </span>identify<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> the most convenient form for the community to protect its own safety.
noise is the most common way to repel a thief attack due to they avoid </span>to be<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> identified, and that could be demonstrable by the huge alarms from the security systems of big places as companies, casinos or museums, where landlords or owners need to protect their property, beyond the security guards, the noise of alert encourage the thief to run away. Furthermore, this is no the only resource people should use to protect their self.
While they activate the alarm method as the first step, the immediately react </span>should be<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> the notification to the police or local security company, because, they are the expert groups to protect people and property against any violent treats or robber attacks, for Instance, </span>numerous<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> cases of bank treats </span>have been avoided<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> or solved by police, just at the push of </span>panic button<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> by a bank employee. Definitely, help from a security group or police is one of the aims people should use when robberies happen. </span>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 435, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he community to protect its own safety. noise is the most common way to repel a ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Noise
...unity to protect its own safety. noise is the most common way to repel a thief...
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Line 4, column 424, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...thief to run away. Furthermore, this is no the only resource people should use to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.0170212766 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.40192147024 2.80592935109 157% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612765957447 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 181.05788904 49.4020404114 366% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 202.0 106.682146367 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5714285714 20.7667163134 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0744836463883 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626925237164 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336768718112 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0656875269189 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177455930598 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.7 13.0946893788 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.23 12.4159519038 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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