Some people are happy to spend their whole life in the same area. Others prefer to live in many different places in their lifetime. Discuss both and give your opinion.
Change is inevitable part of the life. With regards to change, while some group of individuals likes to pass their full life one same area, I would agree with those who choose to travel to different countries in their entire life.
On the one hand, those who prefer to spend their lives in one place are concerned of their family. This is because they have been brought up in the joint family, where they are trained to look after their parents and other family members and are very much attached to their families. For example, in India, generally all people lives in joint family and after growing up, they usually take care of their parents and grandparents under one roof. In contrast, if they have went abroad, they would have left their families alone, and nobody was available to look after their aged parents. However, this could have been solved by sending them to care homes.
On the other hand, these people are more practical in nature and I agree with them. The reason for this is these people want to meet new people and learn different culture to satisfy their inner thirst, which also enhance their practical skills. Travelling to different places and countries allows them to quench their thirst of exploring the world. Conversely, if they spend their whole life travelling, they might end up living alone.
In conclusion, although living in one region with families is important, I feel that exploring the world and living life to their best is the best way to enjoy life as there will be no regret in the future when a person has become old.
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- Your son studies a foreign language at school, but he needs some extra lessons. Write a letter to a teacher asking him/her for some help.-why he needs help?-ask teacher about his experience and methods.- suggest a possible schedule for extra lessons. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 472, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[6]
Message: Note: went is a past participle of "wend". Did you mean 'gone' (past participle of "go")?
Suggestion: gone
...der one roof. In contrast, if they have went abroad, they would have left their fami...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, however, if, look, so, while, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76277372263 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1857261728 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558394160584 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2269705944 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.75 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329497612555 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126070619581 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689493353101 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20045342916 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548458484209 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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