Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Job satisfaction is more crucial than earning well, according to some people, while others believe that handsome income is needed to fulfill needs and live happy life. In my opinion, I believe that passion for work is a great motivation compared to the amount of money one earns, especially in the long run.
To Begin with, enjoyment in work is quite essential for continuation of the same job for years. When one does not love what he/she does, gradually resentment towards work starts to accumulate only to burst out someday. Consequently, it slowly affects the other aspect of life and eventually result in to dissatisfaction in life. But, working on awesome line of work acts as a great source of encouragement which ensure healthy professional growth and mental peace. For instance, people with satisfied job have more chances to be successful and to have longer career than one who hates his jobs, based on 2010 forbes survey.
However, high income is a great rewarding thing, which provide enough resource to buy luxurious items for comfortable life. In other words, it plays vital role in improving living standards by ensuring money for good education and better health care facilities for family. This is the reason why many people continuously switch jobs for appealing salaries. Besides, inflation rates are continuously increasing, it is extremely difficult to meet the basic needs with minimal salary at dream job. Thus, handsome income is requisite for better quality and happy life.
In conclusion, although money is indispensable to lead better life, passionate job provide content and motivation which are two foundation of happy life. Thus, in the beginning of a career, preference should always be given to job satisfaction over salary if job looks promising in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, however, if, look, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18150684932 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76338033509 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63698630137 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7989318544 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.071428571 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21282983084 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710821755147 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475848603937 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133885123959 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204436144644 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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