Some people argued that formal education should start as early as possible, while others thinks that it should be start until 7 year of age.
Discuss both views and give your opinions.
The age of children to begin formal schooling is contentious around the around. While people agree that official education has to start as soon as possible, I believe that children should be free from school before 7 years old.
The main reason people advocates early education is that it assists children to prepare for a competitive world. Studies have shown that the brain of young children is prime to learn, especially when learning languages. And, this ability declines gradually with age. Therefore, earlier the children learn a language, the easier for them in mastering new languages. Proficient in language helps people to find a more secure job. So, it is crucial to start education as early as possible.
Although children may enjoy early schooling, I believe a hassle-free childhood is of paramount importance. There are several reasons support this claim. Firstly, formal education focuses on learning information and academic skills, like writing and reading, it proved which to hindered children’s cognitive development by a wealth of data. Secondly, heavy school works to lessen the time they spent on an outdoor play where children gain other skills, such as social skills and communication silks important for your individual development. Finally, children may not cope with the stress came from studying. It definitely causes a detrimental effect on their health. A study by Oxford university shows that children are prone to depression and anxiety if are under stress.
It seems that no formal and compulsory schooling should begin no sooner than 7 years old.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48015873016 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10933653228 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662698412698 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.504394636 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6428571429 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184424416481 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700086004253 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879828104526 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130545827278 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699255202311 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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