Some people believe that advertisements are useful for viewers while others disagree Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Advertisement is the most effective tool used by marketers to influence the customers. Few people opine that advertisements shown on televisions or roadside helps them in acknowledging which product is thriving well in society while others oppose that. To impart information related to the product adverts are essential. However, huge financial cost is involved in this process.

There are myriad of reasons for usefulness of advertisements. To initiate with, everyday thousands of products are produced by industries to introduce that in retail market. Therefore, viewers can only have access to particular product through advertisements. Offers, discounts and MRP is conveyed to the viewers through audio-visual medium. Secondly, there is less exploitation of consumers. For instance, in earlier times when there was no advertisement shopkeepers used to charge different prices to all customers according to their convenience.

On the other side, excess advertisements create ambiguities for viewers which product should be selected by them. As stiff competition is created between product launching companies, financial resources are wasted by the companies to reach maximum number of viewers. stiff competition, rivalry exists between producers in a perfectly competitive economy. Sometimes advertisements lure the children by its animation effects to purchase thing. Each and every view has two opinions in favour and against.

To recapitulate, without advertisements viewers will not be able to have detailed knowledge about the product which may create monopoly for seller to sell according to his choice. In my opinion, adverts have become part and parcel of life as while sitting at home, we have the opportunity to know the features, quality of the product.

Votes
Average: 5.9 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 268, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Stiff
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7358490566 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17979111825 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660377358491 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3396765606 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4117647059 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5882352941 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174218790172 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495692541079 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485095063341 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100810414177 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022554833115 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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