There is a burgeoning discussion on the role of advertisements for the people. While some people recognized the fact that advertisements are essential, others oppose. This essay will argue on how advertisements are a requirement for people to learn about the life-saving equipment although, the advertisement may mislead people often to purchase unnecessary products.
It is common among people to buy unnecessary products nowadays. They get their intents to purchase unnecessary items that they learn from different mediums of advertising which could be TV, online or print media. For example, my mother bought a new model of the washing machine after learning that this new model does not require you to fill the detergents manually. It turns out, with that washing machine, it is required to purchase refill pack of detergents which is costlier than regular detergents. The advertisement did not mention this which was misleading for my mother. So, people may end up in purchasing unnecessary products with misinformed advertisements.
However, most of the advertisements are valid and let people know about the many lifesaving equipment that they can purchase or services they can avail. These types of adverts are required for society. For instance, in Bangladesh, previously there was no hospital to provide treatment of psychologically sick people. Then, "Monojogot center" a specialized hospital was built, and people learned about it from TV advertisements. Now, this hospital is a complete success in treating people with psychological illness. So, advertisements are a requirement for people to learn about new products or services.
Whether it is a new product or service, advertisements are a common way to let people know about its existence. This essay discussed how adverts may mislead people while it is greatly helpful to inform people about the life-saving services or products that they can purchase. In my opinion, advertisement is mandatory for the people of society to avail services required to lead a happy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun equipment seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much lifesaving equipment', 'a good deal of lifesaving equipment'.
Suggestion: much lifesaving equipment; a good deal of lifesaving equipment
...are valid and let people know about the many lifesaving equipment that they can purchase or services they...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46081504702 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23441707246 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501567398119 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.750109518 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7777777778 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7222222222 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207418534723 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830000778705 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656424235632 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159680960767 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781224430216 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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