Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters is likely to result in society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Others think that it is important for children to take decisions about matters that affect them. Agree/disagree
It is argued that children should be given enough freedom in order to take important decisions while others believe that permitting children to do whatever they like might grow them into selfish individuals.In my opinion, allowing children to make their own choices is beneficial them in long run. This essay will discuss both sides of arguments and why restricting children to make their own life choices is not preferable and they should be given freedom to take any life decisions.
To start with, one of the reasons to permit children to do whatever they want is to make them independent which will make them grow into strong willed adults when they step out in outside world. Furthermore, children who know what they want in future are more successful than those who dont have any ambition.Needless to say, child who have independent thinking skills will always work out for a solution when they confronted any problem. Hence, it is evident that it is better to make children free for taking any life decisions.
On the other hand, excessive freedom is detrimental for the growth of child.When children are allowed to do whatever they like, they are more likely to take things for granted. Since they are not mature enough to differentiate between right and wrong, they often think that they have the freedom to do any thing which can turn them into criminals . For instance, Report showed that those children who have full freedom to take any decision and whose parents have no control on them are more likely to fall into antisocial activities.
To conclude, both sides have its merits and demerits.on balance ,i think it is good to provide freedom to children but there should be a permissible limit . This will deter them to grow into a selfish person in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, so, while, for instance, i think, in my opinion, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93046357616 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5707420993 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509933774834 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.6434599939 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.9 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235826849807 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108826342843 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731830254701 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152041238921 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767918009073 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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