Some people believe that to be successful at a sport you need a natural ability and others think that hard work and practice can make you successful. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Although natural ability is thought by some is required to be successful in sport, other people consider that hard work and practice is the key to success. In my opinion, natural talent, hard work and continue practice is required to be successful in sport.
To being with, there is no doubt that people born with talents can easily achieve success in their area of interest. For instance, if we read biography of almost every world class sportsman, we can realise that they have had their passion and ability in that particular sport since they were child. Furthermore, these gifted people are achieving the pinnacle of success in their carrier without much effort. However, they should be properly guided and put in to the right track from the beginning otherwise no matter how talented and gifted there are they can be end up with misery.
On the other hand, people who has interest in some particular sport also can achieve success through hard working and continuous practice. However, they may have to put some extra effort to compete with the people who are naturally skilled. Conversely, no matter how talented or gifted you are if you do not work hard or practice towards something, it wouldn’t be easy to achieve profound results. Especially in sport, physical fitness and training is vitally important to have good stamina, which is a key to success in any sport. Admittedly, all the members in a world cup winning football team may not be naturally gifted but with proper training, hardworking and team working they all can achieve success.
In conclusion, although people with natural skills have more benefits of achieving success in sport, hardworking and continue practice is equally important to excel.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'begin'?
Suggestion: begin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, furthermore, however, if, may, so, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07317073171 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57162213751 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515679442509 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0358973227 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 121.333333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324919950096 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1450099491 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980563228431 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228367476191 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114649732668 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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