Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a country’s success, while others think that there are other factors, which can be used to measure a country’s success. What are these factors? And among them, which one is more important than others?
It would be difficult to support the idea that economic progress alone could measure the success of a country. There can be many other factors which provide details about this. Happiness index of the people, Education standards and number or research publish per year and number of patent files per annum are some of the other ways of measuring. Among these, I believe the amount of research per year is a prime way of measuring success. Let us discuss that and education standards in details to get a better idea.
Admittedly, people's happiness is hugely matters when considering a country's success. No matter how rich they are if the people are not literate and educated, they would not be able to enjoy the modern way of living. Currently, the world is increasingly moving towards a technological revolution which is backed by education. Therefore, higher education standards of a country much matter for the ultimate success. Notably, children should be well knowledgeable while having a profound understanding of good virtues. Only then, they can be financially stable and be positives when they are growing up.
When the education system improves, concomitantly scientific research and innovation are also increasing. Nowadays, countries which are investing exponentially on such research are leading the market. For instance, many European countries are leading the annual patent submission and research publishing indices. The reason for this is because their education system is highly efficient, and as a result, they utilize their time more productively. Therefore, the overall quality of life and happiness index is higher compared to the big countries such as China and India. In contrast, in terms of economic progress, India and China are becoming superpowers, but the overall quality of life is not well-developed.
To recapitulate, to measure the countries success, annual research publication is an excellent factor according to my view. Despite financial market values, this provides an in-depth insight of overall success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, in contrast, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43125 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94268160017 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571875 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7603471753 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.4736842105 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8421052632 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05263157895 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284872958689 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830039816014 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620827023195 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161617834404 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570010744548 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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