Some people believe that to be successful at a sport you need a natural ability and others think that hard work and practice can make you successful.
Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Many individuals agree that to be a successful sportsperson people should have an innate ability and talent, whereas, others believe that to excel in any sports hard work and practice is essential. In my opinion, I do believe that working hard and practicing day and night are considered to be the foundation stone for a person to achieve fame in any sports.
Several people have this notion that a person can become popular in sports and can achieve the desired outcome through its hard work and practice. To be more precise, if a sportsperson is passionate about sports and with practice with a lot of dedication will not only help them to acquire the require skills and talent but also to attain perfection in their field. To elucidate, Sachin Tendulkar, a renowned cricket play worked industriously for many years to attain the title of the Best Cricket Player in the World.
However, some have the opinion that the inherent talent and ability of a person is the main criteria in deciding that whether he will be successful in the field of sports or not. Simply stating, an individual who is born with a particular talent and ability, is not required to do hard work and practice in order to be successful. To illustrate, a well renowned musician Mozart, had the inherited quality and creative skills in composing music since his childhood days and was not perfect in his field through practice.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that people can acquire skills and expertise in any sports by being determinant and through hard working which will help them to be successful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...tion will not only help them to acquire the require skills and talent but also to attain pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, whereas, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87407407407 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68339403863 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518518518519 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 22.7813005406 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 146.222222222 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271981352557 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121896608753 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760198369331 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183432812393 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530739340467 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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