Many people consider that the most excellent way to spend a vacation in an abroad is to go out to meet people in spite of staying in the hotel most of the time. In my opinion, I agree with the above mention statement and a foreign country should be spent with the locals of that country to enjoy it most.
Very few times people get a chance to travel overseas and explore the world, especially in developing country like India, once in a lifetime people travel to a foreign country to spend their holidays. The best part of spending holidays in the foreign country is with localities instead of booking costly hotels and staying the luxurious life in the hotel. Locals can guide you in the best way and help you in your needed things in the trip such as money exchange, understanding the language, in short, they can be your best tour guide. Trip with localities can be cheaper and better in terms of money saving. Traveller with locals can know much about their cultures and traditions they follow,
On the other hand, travelling abroad and staying in a hotel can also help us in terms of relaxing, yoga exercises, playing indoor games and enjoying delicious food of that country.
To sum up, the best way to enjoy your trip is by exploring the world outside the room hotels with the help of localities but few people enjoy their trip with indoor activities.
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- Some people feel that entertainers ( e.g. film stars, musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? What other jobs should be paid highly? 61
- Computers are becoming an essential part of school lessons. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion. 78
- You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes.Write a letter to the community college. In your letter:say which advertisement you are answeringdescribe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they woul 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 73, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[2]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...st excellent way to spend a vacation in an abroad is to go out to meet people in spite of...
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Line 3, column 694, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eir cultures and traditions they follow, On the other hand, travelling abroad and...
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Line 7, column 178, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...njoy their trip with indoor activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in short, such as, in my opinion, in spite of, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61885245902 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36095100043 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512295081967 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 337.5 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.8421582788 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.875 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29534749751 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141664866518 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103768681588 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176154431388 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103953529458 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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