It is jealous to realise that children have abundant free time to fiddle away while adults have to work eight hours a day with little time for relaxation. Therefore, some people propose that children should be allocated more school because they are given excessive free time. However, I oppose this proposal. I think children should spend their free time playing and eating due to the nature of childhood.
On one hand, children are inefficient in learning due to the stage of childhood. The brain of a child is rapidly growing; thus, children cannot remember all the knowledge learnt in school. The memory in childhood is so terrible that a study reveals that an aduld recalls merely 4% of their childhood. Therefore, I reject the suggestion that children should spend more time on school work, rather I deem children ought to spend their free time to play and eat because his suits their need in childhood.
On the other hand, the rapid growth of body requires plenty time to exercise and sufficient food to consume. The stage of childhood is the fastest growing period. In order to provide adequate nutirents to nurish, children must consume enough food. Besides, child should have adequate amount of exercise to develop a healthy physique. Therefore, child plays whenever and wherever. On the contrary, if children spend more time in school, they cannot have sufficient time to play and eat. I believe it is the best for child to spend their free time to play and eat, rather than study in school.
In conclusion, the special nature of childhood requires adults to take a different approach to their free time. Children have bad memory and require food and exercise. I think children should spent their free time in playing and eating.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, i think, in conclusion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93559322034 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43373777857 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484745762712 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8447765686 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8888888889 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3888888889 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.475908076027 0.244688304435 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162866958319 0.084324248473 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151557586069 0.0667982634062 227% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.34337244717 0.151304729494 227% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0992270558585 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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