Literacy is one of the main components of everyone's life. Therefore, now a days most of the parents are giving more priority to education over any other stuffs for their children but on other hand, several parents want to see over all personality development in their kids. One of the important issue these days are whether to make free time education based or should it be entertainment based. However, I strongly believe that one should give space to fun time as well.
It is worth considering that everyone on planet feels boredom, when asked to do monotonous activity. We generally have experienced that if we keep on performing similar kind of work, we easily get either irritated or bored and a time comes when we just do it for the sake of doing it. In that course, we usually are unable to use time fruitfully. Same thing applied even with the little one also, if they will not get any leisure period to fresh up their mind.
Apart from that, if a child gets few hours to relax their mind by some shorts of entertaining activities, that will work in favor of them. Even medical practitioner also suggests playing for few hours everyday to distress. Adding about my young age, I use to spend at least an hour playing outdoor games such as cricket or football. I personally have experienced that it helped me when I use to study after returning from my sports activity.
So, it becomes very crucial to allow children to have fun time every now and then, which definitely will help in advancement of youngster. To summarize, I would say that space should be given for leisure activity as well for the overall personality development of children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...omponents of everyones life. Therefore, now a days most of the parents are giving more pri...
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Suggestion: are usually
...he sake of doing it. In that course, we usually are unable to use time fruitfully. Same thi...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... distress. Adding about my young age, I use to spend at least an hour playing outdo...
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Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...cial to allow children to have fun time every now and then, which definitely will help in advancem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, at least, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70446735395 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60912788656 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621993127148 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4641505465 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7857142857 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169152776158 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521499977091 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383449976479 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971775996793 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03480542976 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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