It is known that few people consider recreational activities of children who aren't related to studying as time waste. Is education everything for a child and there are no requirements like skill or talent. Although schooling is important, it doesn't mean that it is the only thing to focus on. The following essay contradicts the above-mentioned statement.
Firstly there have been other activities which are to be prioritized along with education. For instance, let's consider sports. They not only help in maintaining physical health but also develops qualities like team spirit and leadership. These characteristics help the amateurs in exploring their dreams and chasing them. Thus can be proven as necessary as knowledge.
Arts and skills are overlooked in the current scenario. An artist has a better understanding of nature and the world. Arts like poetry and painting are on the verge of extinction. They help kids discover the beauty of nature and also boost their imagination to a higher level. And what about skills like dancing or singing. Not just free time activities but can be developed as career options. Skills, when nurtured at a very early can be developed to an extreme level and helps in leaving an impact on the world.
Social grooming is also one of the important aspects of life. This if not developed at a young age, will be hard to tackle. This can be accustomed to playing and spending time with fellow kids. The way people communicate when present in a group is hugely influenced by this aspect.
By considering all the above-cited aspects, it is obvious that recreational activities need not be related to education. Thus it can be concluded that the above-mentioned perception of people is not legitimate.
- Nowadays people are spending more time in workplace and staying away from home for work Discuss its advantages and disadvantages with your own experiences 71
- Young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in the cities What are the reasons Do advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages 78
- More and more people do online shopping Why is this the situation What is the effect of online shopping on shops and communities 56
- Fossil fuels such as coal oil and natural gas are used in many countries The use of alternative sources of energy including wind and solar power is encouraged Is this trend is a positive or negative development 56
- some people believe that using a bicycle as your main form of transport has a lot of advantages whereas others it has many disadvantages discuss both views and give your opinion 72
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, so, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08013937282 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96478622954 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581881533101 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2081623418 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.2727272727 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0454545455 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.68181818182 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122330485607 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330445799884 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327036730114 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0700656107393 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164476625033 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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