Some people believe that children s leisure activities must be educational otherwise they are a complete waste of time Do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience

Equovelly time is precious and must be managed rationaly , that’s why parents must teach their children the importance of time specialy leisure , in this essay i will detail this idea.

First of all, managing time is a complex task even for adult and so for kids, parents always seek the perfection for their children and force them to study all time even in week ends, in my opinion it ‘s a lot for kids i think they must enjoy their free time en playing and doing the activities that they like even non educational one.

Secondly, in my opinion leisure participate in the construction of the kid’s personality , and i give my self as example , only the funny leisures that still graved in my memory, playing outside , chasing buterflies ... , it’s that kind of plays that makes me a stable and loving women today , and if time goes bake i will do the same thing.

In breif, i think that parents must allowed their children to have a free time , when they can just enjoy their time without pressure and stress.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, i think, kind of, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 180.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36885817221 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616666666667 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.5894172487 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.0 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 20.7667163134 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.0 7.06120827912 255% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207914233845 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104739441539 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043621818945 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122529647772 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326084769572 0.056905535591 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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